100WC week#10

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                                                                        Brothers

"Jacob, why would you take all the toilet paper and T.P the bathroom. Mom is going to be so mad!" "Plus you put Dad's shaving cream all over the mirror." " Ok, we've got to clean this up before Mom gets home." "First lets clean the shaving cream off the mirror."
"After that we will take the toilet paper down."
" But where will we hide it all?"
"I have an idea we will put it in the toilet." Flussshhh
"Oh great, now it is clogged."
"I think I hear Mom"
"Oh great now we've got even on our plate"
"Be quiet mom's coming...



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  1. UnknownNovember 19, 2017 at 10:21 PM

    A very creative idea for a story. If the same person is still talking in the same paragraph you do not need to stop and start the quotation marks. Just use end quotation marks when they finish speaking. I think you forgot a couple of words in the second to last sentence.

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